This week I read from my flash story, “Mother Dove” which is part of Shadow Memories. Listen at AudioBoo: http://audioboo.fm/boos/150800-mother-dove
Tag Archives: Short fiction
Shadow Memories on Amazon
My ebook, Shadow Memories, is now available on Amazon for Kindle and Kindle for iPhone. See my previous post, “New Book: Shadow Memories,” for details.
Find the book here: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B003U2TNDK
You will also find Shadow Memories at Smashwords participating in the Summer/Winter Sale for 100% off during the month of July. Use code SW100 at checkout (or donate a dollar if you prefer.) http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/17029
Shadow Memories coming soon to iBookstore, B&N, and others.
AudioBoo: The Only Color
Giving AudioBoo a try for the first #SpokenSunday with my story, “The Only Color” which is part of my Shadow Memories collection.
Visit the AudioBoo page to listen: http://audioboo.fm/boos/148479-the-only-color Click on the Spoken Sunday tags to find more.
To learn more about #SpokenSunday, visit http://spokensunday.wordpress.com/
Runaway Jack
a short story by David G Shrock
Susan studied her father’s slumped posture, his trancelike eyes staring at the newspaper piled with orange fibrous mush, and the knife. His hand clenched the handle so tight that she could see the blue veins rising on his wrist. She had never seen him like this before.
“I’m sorry,” he said.
“Dad,” said Susan. Tearing her gaze from her father, she looked down at the newspaper. In the corner, a pile of pumpkin seeds waited for roasting. Two chunks of pumpkin rested on an advertisement for a sporting goods store. The triangular shapes appeared like they might be eyes. “Where’s the pumpkin?”
“Jack ran away.”
A crash sent Susan hopping, her head spinning. She looked across the kitchen at the corner leading into the living room. From the other room came the sound of feet crunching over glass. Scrambling, she slipped across the tile onto the carpet with her father’s steps pounding behind. Rounding the corner, she screeched to a halt in the center of the room.
Behind the sofa, on the window sill, an orange pumpkin sat among shattered glass. Half of the window remained, jagged shards reflecting the lamplight against the grey outdoors. The pumpkin swiveled, bearing his jagged teeth and revealing his burning triangle eyes. The toothy grin moved.
Hearing the deep mumbling voice, Susan froze. Jack muttered an unintelligible chant, and his eyes raged with hate. And Jack was not alone.
Alice, her rag doll, held the round gourd in her arms. Susan recognized the same flat expression, the black button eyes over the narrow red mouth. The doll appeared no different, but walked on her own holding Jack in her arms, bouncing him across the window sill in a horrid dance. Jack made a guttural sound, nearly coughing, but laughing. Susan felt certain that the pumpkin laughed at her.
Knife waving, her father raced across the room lunging over the sofa. Hefting Jack, Alice dove outside clomping onto the porch.
Susan chased after throwing the front door open and stormed onto the porch. Hearing a commotion on the drive, she ran around the corner finding her brother sitting on the cement. Following the gaze, she spotted the pumpkin and her doll riding a skateboard. In Alice’s grasp, Jack leaned hard. Wheels howled as the skateboard bounded onto the street. Throwing a foot down, Alice pushed the board faster disappearing beyond the fence.
“Nathan,” said Susan, “get off your bum and help me.”
“That pumpkin,” said Nathan. Shaking his head, he climbed to his feet. “And your doll stole my skateboard!”
They ran. At the end of the drive, Susan spotted a car approaching. Screeching to a halt, she threw an arm out holding Nathan back. The two watched the car rumble by with Mr. Gardner behind the wheel. The old man smiled and raised a hand to the window.
After the sedan passed, Susan searched the street. Spotting the runaway pumpkin and her betraying doll speeding away, she tugged on Nathan’s arm. Together they sprinted by Mr. Gardner’s house and passed the corner coffee shop. Waiting for the crossing light, she searched for Jack but found only cars moving along the street.
“Jack couldn’t have gone that way,” said Susan. Traffic was too heavy for a speeding pumpkin on this end of Couch Street.
Nathan pointed down the quiet cross street. “Over there!”
The signal flashed an orange hand, but they checked for traffic and ran across leaping onto the sidewalk. Speeding around Mr. Thatcher, Nathan leaped over the waving cane.
Mr. Thatcher swayed sideways leaning on his cane. “Careful of the traffic,” he said.
“I’ve a pumpkin to catch,” said Susan.
Following Nathan, Susan ran into Tom’s Toys and squealed across the polished floor to a stop. Lining the shelves, stuffed toys stared back. Action figures stood trapped in their plastic shells dangling from hooks. Toy cars lined the top shelf.
Behind the counter, a teenage boy dressed in a red Tom’s Toys apron stood frozen. Jaw unhinging, he tried to speak but said nothing.
Spotting a trail of open plastic packages on the floor, Susan tugged Nathan into an aisle. Stepping over a cardboard box, she spotted several green army men laying on the floor. She found more plastic soldiers inside a ripped plastic bag. A toy red caboose sat on its side beside empty boxes. At the end of the aisle, an action figure stood on the floor, its plastic gun pointed at them.
Nathan glanced at the action figure and looked at Susan. Shrugging, she returned the bewildered expression. Stepping over the action figure, they crept into the back hall finding more empty packages strewn across the floor. Pushing the door open, they entered the storage room.
On the shelves, slumped cardboard boxes spilled plastic packages. Toys littered the floor, some in packages and others laying broken or crushed.
Kicking through the toys and packages, the siblings made their way to the back. Susan shook her head at the destruction of perfectly good toys. Glancing back, Nathan put his finger over his lips. Susan spotted the back door open a crack, and stood still.
A swishing sound breezed by the opening. Shoes clomped outside. And mumbling. Susan heard a deep voice sounding like Jack. Arms stretched out to the sides, Nathan carefully stepped over a smashed package. He reached out for the door, and Susan held her breath.
Pushing the door slowly, Nathan looked outside. He took a step and peered around the back of the door. “Excuse me,” he said.
Susan released her breath. Leaping over a package, she joined her brother at the door finding a small parking lot between shops. Behind the door, a tall man wearing a raincoat and hat peered into the back of a delivery truck.
“Sir,” said Nathan, “have you seen a pumpkin?”
The delivery man kept his back to them, mumbling and struggling with something in the back of the truck. Peering inside, Susan noticed the truck was empty. The man waved his arms about grasping at nothing. Something wriggled beneath the raincoat making a clattering sound.
Nathan stepped closer. “Sir?”
Spinning around, the man swung a baseball bat. Nathan ducked, and Susan leaped back. The bat clanged against the side of the building. Susan gazed at their attacker, her eyes growing wide.
Within the open raincoat, toys wriggled about crawling up and down the legs. Green army men marched in rows winding in and out of a skeleton made of plush animals, toy cars, and blocks. Action figures held frisbee knees in place attached to batons for lower legs and toy train cars forming upper legs. The soldiers crawled in and around the pelvis of numbered wood blocks and up into a torso of dolls held together by a ribcage of action figures. At the end of the sleeve, colorful building blocks gripped the bat.
Sitting atop the shoulders, Alice held Jack in her arms turning the gourd so his burning triangle eyes peered down at Susan. Jack made a guttural sound turning into a rumbling laugh. Susan peered up at her doll, pleading. Alice stared back with her button eyes.
Watching the green army men wriggling over the skeleton disappearing into the sleeve, Susan realized that Jack commanded the toys. Jack chanted in a strange language, and the toys obeyed raising the bat. The clumsy beast ratcheted the weapon higher.
Leaping up, Nathan snatched the bat away sending a spray of building blocks and army men flying against the wall. Twisting around, the beast took two clumsy steps, its feet of toy cars clanging on the asphalt, and stepped onto the skateboard.
Susan chased after, and Nathan fell in behind. At the far end of the parking lot, traffic rumbled on Couch Street. Spotting the skateboard veering away from the road towards a loading dock, she waved at her brother. “The road,” she said. “Force Jack to Couch Street.”
Nathan sprinted cutting off the skateboard, and Jack leaned the other way sending the skateboard rumbling back towards the road. Susan ran wide to block the other escape. Jack leaned hard spilling toys, but the skateboard headed straight for the road and bounced off the curb.
Tires screeched, horns blared, and a car smashed into the beast turning it into a shower of toys, the raincoat fluttering over a car and onto the road. Another set of screeching tires smashed the coat.
Reaching the street, Susan looked around at seven cars stopped at crazy angles. Drivers popped out, their worried faces taking in the toys strewn across the road. Chunks of pumpkin was all that was left of Runaway Jack.
Following orange streaks, Susan pushed her way through a circle of confused drivers. Spotting Alice sitting against the curb, she leaped over plastic army men and snatched the doll.
Alice flopped in her arms, and the button eyes offered nothing. Without the magic chanted by Jack, Alice was a normal doll again. Squeezing Alice close, Susan looked around spotting Nathan carrying his skateboard.
“What now?” Nathan said.
“Back to the patch,” said Susan. “We need a new pumpkin.”
“Okay, but how about I pick one out this time.”
“Not a chance.” Susan laughed. “But this time we’ll skip the carving. I don’t think Dad will go near another pumpkin.”
Suffocation Bell
a short story
After facing an invisible killer, a taphephobic warrior discovers her master’s secret within a room of glass coffins.

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In white letters on blue, the sign announced Old Town, the shadow of Roseland. A gloom settled over the city, rain misting through the streetlights casting a veil. Cars groaned along the backstreets. From a nearby nightclub, music thumped while patrons in Halloween garb filed inside. The falling mist eased and floated shifting sideways, and fell again, moistening the ground, a wet fog licking the pavement.
Tigris waited for the streetcar. The night air felt cool, but the black coat stifled her. Opening the front, she let air inside. Peering up she felt the mist kiss her cheeks. Droplets speckled her dark glasses. Toe tapped to the rumbling beat of the club music.
The rhythm working inside her, she moved, rocking shoulders and swaying hips. Damp weather threatening suffocation, dancing was her breath of freedom. Head nodding, body bouncing, she danced in a circle.
From inside the glass waiting booth, a young man watched her while nodding his head to his own music playing through his earphones. Beside him, a balding old man stood with hands stuffed in pockets. Wrinkling his nose, he eyed her suspiciously. Not everyone enjoyed dancing.
Tigris stopped dancing, but her toe continued tapping.
From the left, a blazing headlight flooded the tracks. A bell toned twice. The streetcar whirred to a stop spraying light shining from its compartments. Doors clicked open sliding apart along the side of the steel beast. The old man shuffled through the door, and Tigris followed glancing around the interior washed in blue-green light. Even dark glasses failed at fighting the brilliance within the compartment…(continued)
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This dark fantasy adventure provides a peek into the Draco Torre mythology including minor characters from my novel, Raven Memory.
I welcome and appreciate comments on this story, including negative constructive criticism.
Short Fiction Needs a Platform
In an earlier post, “Short Fiction Decline“, I point out Neil Clarke’s post on the decline of short fiction publication readership. He remains optimistic due to some new online publications showing promise. A recent post, “More Crappy News for Short Story Writers” by Seth Fischer starts a discussion on short story collections including a response by one story blog, and a post by Larry Dark. Please take a look at these posts including the informative comments on Fischer’s post.
Some points brought up in the discussion:
- Novels get more promotion.
- Book publishers avoid short fiction.
- Some short fiction sells.
- Competition with instant access media.
- Consumers today have shorter attention spans (??)
- Some readers want immersion with long stories.
- Traditional books may not be the best place for short fiction.
I noted #5 as a question because of the debate in the comments under Fischer’s post: Does short fiction benefit? One comment points out that short stories may require more dedication by the reader. Do readers have short attention spans? Not avid readers.
For the average consumer, finding short fiction is a challenge. Large book chains no longer carry literary magazines leaving a consumer searching through small independent book stores gazing at a limited supply. Publishers and retail stores promote novels. Dark points out that some story collections sell very well. Short fiction sells when promoted.
Perhaps consumers have grown a taste for novels finding short stories more difficult to enjoy. They want immersion. Reading short fiction is not the same as reading a novel. And when curious consumers try a few short stories, they find boring literary prose, some incomplete stories without a beginning or ending. Or the reader finds a genre magazine full of poorly written stories. Searching for online publications may results in ugly websites with bizarre text colors making reading a chore. So, many readers stick to short stories written by familiar authors like Stephen King. And big book publishers cringe at the idea of a short story collection.
Short fiction needs a platform. If publications want to survive in this world full of noise they need to be part of the community with their readers. Help readers find the stories they want to read. Share knowledge by taking part in other communities. Design beautiful websites with easy navigation. And promote good writers.
Writers need to join the community, work with publications, improve their skills. Write fantastic short stories.
Short Fiction Decline
Short fiction readership is in decline. Like many periodicals, short fiction publications face distribution issues, fight for tighter shelf space, and compete with other media. Collections of short stories compete with novels. The traditional newspaper is extinct, and magazines follow close behind. In order for short fiction to survive, it needs to change with the times.
Neil Clarke of Clarkesworld charts the decline in readership of short fiction magazines. Even though several magazines have ended, Clarke points out that a few new launches are attracting attention including Tor.com. Print magazines face distribution issues, and need to change in order to survive. Over at iRoSF, talk of declining short fiction readership includes discussions about if the short fiction market is supported primarily by the writers themselves. Other new publications have opened up including a few in the Twitter micro-fiction market.
Noise is a problem. So much competes for readers attention including social media such as Facebook, YouTube, and blogs. Kristine Kathryn Rusch in “What’s Louder than Noise?” points out the difficulty of authors getting noticed, including established authors. Rusch claims that the great American novel is now an impossibility. Michael Hyatt points out in “The Importance of Building Your Platform” that new published books grew in last year competing for the same shelf space* along with more media competing for attention.
Short story delivery changes over time. Before the printing press, people shared stories orally using poetry to help remember the telling. Plays make room for movies. Newspapers move online delivering news faster and cheaper. Technology changes entertainment moving stories onto paper and into new media. We now have digital book readers using technology like electronic paper displays. Michael Miner of Chicago Reader reports on Dan Sinker’s idea of delivering short stories to cell phones via CellStories.net. Many read news articles while at the coffee shop. Why not fiction? Last year, Stephen King and Marvel teamed up to produce a graphic adaption of a short story. Or on a lower budget, some magazines such as Weird Tales show interest in video flash fiction. Storybird encourages users to collaborate using story and art to produce works that others can view or play with like a toy. Stories in video games grow more complex each year, including interactive stories. What new story sharing methods await us?
We still have plays, we have paper books, and we continue to tell stories orally. We also have new means to enjoy our stories, keep our stories, and share our stories. And that’s the way we want it. Both authors and publications need to build their platforms, survive the noise. Short fiction publication must change.
*Here “shelf space” refers to total outlets including “On Demand” besides traditional published books. Bowker reports on US book distribution for last year showing traditional books declined.

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