Last Hope (for Hope Hill) #FridayFlash

a flash story by David G Shrock (Listen at AudioBoo)

Standing between wagon ruts, Draco Torre considers the sign announcing Hope Hill. Stars meet prairie, flat horizons. Hope without a hill.

Following ruts, Torre scans dark buildings. Nothing stirs. Blasted heat carries the stench of death.

At the far end of Hope Hill, light flows from an open doorway, down three steps splashing the road. The church casts a sullen look. Catcalls of rapists, howls of murderers pour from the doorway. A scream shatters the night.

Not even the hottest summer on record matches the blazing eyes of Draco Torre.
Throwing open duster, Torre grasps guns. Last hope for Hope Hill.

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This is a flash version of the opening to my second novel. Different, but captures the essence.

101 words. A flash contest at not from here, are you? challenges followers to write a story of 101 words containing two key words, summer and heat. I haven’t entered, but I wanted to see what I could do within the constraints. I may give it another try, but writing a complete flash story is hard enough. Check out “Dog Days Summer Flash Contest” hosted by Michael J. Solender at The NOT.

Zombie Luv Flash Fic Contest: Undead Unlove

a flash story by David G Shrock

Alistair Monroe sat on the wood floor, his back leaning against the wall. He watched the flame swirl in the lantern beside him. Every once in a while, blue shot up from the center sending the little flame into a flickering frenzy before settling back into its dance. A revolver sat on the floor between his outstretched legs. Dirt and blood stains covered his boots.

Breathing in the musty air, Alistair smelled rotting flesh. The putrid stench stained the air, the drapes, and even his clothes. He missed the smell of horses. His stomach gurgled, and he belched. Running his hand through his hair, he found it slick with blood. Not his blood, not all of it anyway. Marie Dodson had lost so much blood.

Rolling his head against the wall, Alistair gazed over at the parlor. Flooding through the broken window, moonlight bathed Marie’s corpse laying on the rug. Claw marks covered the back of her dress. A gash on her head spilled blood onto the rug. His bride stared back with her dead eyes. The corpse farted. Until recently, he never realized just how much the dead farted and burped.

It was only minutes away.

First it had happened to Jasper the blacksmith. Jasper had fallen dead just after noon three days prior. Everyone had thought it was the heat. That night, Jasper had risen attacking others on sight. The next day, Jasper’s shy mistress, Beth, had fallen ill and died followed by several others.

Soon, Marie Dodson would join the living dead.

Leaning his head back against the wall, he closed his eyes and listened to the quiet. A normal Saturday night meant dancing and singing in town square led by Lester’s fiddle. The gunfire had ceased hours ago. Even the dogs had fallen silent.

Movement caught his eye. He snatched up the revolver and aimed at the window.

The drapes wiggled in the breeze.

Alistair glanced at the corpse on the rug and looked at the revolver in his hand. There was only one thing for it, he thought. He touched the barrel to the side of his head and squeezed his eyes shut.

A swooshing sound broke the stillness, and a warm breeze tussled his hair. A clomp, and the floor shuddered.

Opening his eyes, Alistair found Marie standing on the rug. Her stance appeared awkward, leaning forward, knees bent, and off to the side. Her head lolled as her dead eyes roved around. Like the others, these eyes never really found their target, but he knew. His undead bride peered at him. He cried out her name emptying his lungs.

The thing howled sounding like a cat hissing and coughing a hairball at the same time.

Pushing the barrel hard against his temple, Alistair screamed. Marie reached out and stomped across the floor.

Turning the gun around, Alistair aimed at her skull and pulled the trigger. The snarling face exploded spraying bits and blood, and the corpse collapsed at his feet. Scrambling up, boots clomping, he stumbled out the door. His legs burned sending him into hobble.

Whispering her name repeatedly, he stumbled onto the dusty road. He opened the revolver. Three bullets remained, two for them and one for him. Clicking the revolver closed, he reached for sky and cried out the name of his bride to the moon.

Waiting for the others, he searched the dark buildings along the road. The one that had attacked Marie was still out here somewhere. It was too quiet. The night bugs had abandoned their song to the prairie. Then he heard the familiar shuffling.

Turning around he found two dark figures on the road coming at him. They moved slower than the others, and the big one limped nearly dragging a foot. Holding him in an arm, the small one, a woman, helped him down the road.

Astonished at the sight of other survivors, his jaw fell open.

As they approached, features climbed out of the darkness revealing torn clothing. Tatters of a dress streamed around the woman’s dirt covered legs, her bare feet stomping over the hard clay. Dried blood covered their pale faces, their eyes were clouded over, but Alistair recognized them, Jasper the blacksmith and his mistress, Beth.

Alistair aimed at the large target and fired. The undead blacksmith fell, flopping over onto his side, and Beth collapsed onto her knees. He marched closer for a better shot.

Beth howled. Leaning over, she touched her crusty lips to the blacksmith’s cheek.

Aiming the gun at their skulls, he watched them embrace and kiss each other. They appeared nothing like their former selves, not just the rot, but their deliberate movements out in the open. Could it all be impulses? Some attacked anything that moved, others ate everything including the dogs, and this pair, uninhibited lovers groping and kissing each other. He shook his head wondering how much the living dead remembered of their former lives.

Beth lurched up. There were no tears, but she appeared to cry. She released a hissing moan, unmistakable anguish. Leaning over, she covered the blacksmith with her body. She protected her lover.

Had Marie Dodson remembered anything? He shook, but he held his aim on the skull of the undead woman. His gut rumbled, and he burped, the nastiness filling his mouth.

The living dead moaned.

Alistair Monroe pulled the trigger.

The gunshot crushed the night air.

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Learn more about the Zombie Luv Flash Fic Contest by visiting http://marisrandomities.blogspot.com/2010/06/zombie-luv-flash-fic-contest-is-here.html

Here are the guidelines from mari’s randomites:

  • Word count: maximum 1.000
  • The story must be a romance between two zombies. Make it as horrific as you like. ;)
  • Stories containing animal cruelty, torture, graphic sex or violence, any form of exaltation of violence, racism or other forms of prejudice will be immediately disqualified.
  • Post your entry on your own blog, with a title resembling this: Zombie Luv Flash Fic Contest: Story Title
  • Copy and paste the contest logo and the guidelines at the end of your entry post.

Flash Stories

A flash story consists of 1,000 words or less (some insist on 500,) enjoyed in about five minutes. Writing a short story is a different beast from writing a novel, and a very short story is another creature still. Brevity is key. Words are valuable, used sparingly, given strong respect.

I’m not as familiar with short fiction; I primarily read novels. A year ago, I struggled to write a complete short story, one with a beginning, middle, and end. I could write a slice of life or an excerpt, but a complete story in under a 1,000 words became my challenge. A good goal, concise writing improves all forms including the epic.

I practiced by writing Twitter fiction working with the words. I read short stories, studying them, comparing different styles. I wrote a few short stories without a care for the word count.

Then I started reading #fridayflash. Reading the stories and comments, I realized what I needed: goals, sharing, and feedback. I started by commenting on other stories, and when I felt I was ready I wrote my first in October titled, “Young Secret.” The reading, sharing, and writing each week improved my skill very quickly. I have also gained an appreciation of short fiction. I thank the #fridayflash participants for sharing their stories, sharing knowledge, and for their support. Thanks!

My latest flash story, “Mother Dove” is the result of my effort. I now take my new knowledge and apply it to my novels. I will continue to post flash fiction on Fridays, not every week, but often enough as long as I enjoy it. You may find my flash stories posted with the Flash Fiction tag.

What are your thoughts on flash fiction?

#fridayflash

Jon of Mad Utopia hosts #fridayflash. There you will find a weekly summary posted each Saturday containing links to flash stories. With over 50 stories each week, the #fridayflash group offers a large selection spanning every genre. On your lunch break, pick a few stories and comment on the ones you like.

This week Mad Utopia offers a contest just for readers. Read the complete details. After reading, nominate your favorite story for “Readers Choice.” Good luck.

My First Writing Contest

I entered my first writing contest at the age of ten winning the coveted Giant Cookie award. My story was about a pumpkin sprouting green legs and running around the world. A ten year-old knows few details about world travel. How does a pumpkin obtain a passport? Of course, my pumpkin avoided the authorities by stowing away with the luggage and running from everyone. I did my research inspecting my globe and asking my mother, an experienced world traveler, many questions. The story turned out long (for a ten year-old) of more than twenty handwritten pages. Circling the globe is a long journey, afterall.

The decision was so close that the judges chose two stories for first place, awarding a giant cookie to each author, and I shared first place with a good friend. The top four winning authors took turns reading their stories to the class. Afterward, I enjoyed my giant chocolate chip cookie,  nearly the size of a cookie sheet. Awards for second and third were smaller, equally delicious, cookies. Between bites, my friend and I congratulated each other on winning first place without any argument over which story was the best. We were content with not having to share a cookie, although we did compare cookies making sure they were of roughly equivalent size.

Neil Gaiman might enjoy his Hugo for The Graveyard Book, but is it as tasty as the Giant Cookie? On Twitter, @neilhimself (Gaiman) says he will win a pie if The Graveyard Book remains a top ten bestseller for the 52nd consecutive week [NY Times, Childrens chapter books.] That pie will be a special award indeed.

The original pumpkin story is no longer in my possession, but much of the story still resides within my memory. Instead of re-writing the story, I plan on writing a new adventure for my pumpkin, Jack. Check back later for an announcement.

[Update: "Runaway Jack" is my new story based on this original contest story.]