Comments on: Dunston Monster Contents http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/ Thu, 29 Jul 2010 19:25:22 -0400 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Lily Mulholland http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-452 Lily Mulholland Mon, 15 Feb 2010 10:17:58 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-452 Hoorah! Well done David. Your ability to really 'place' the story was its strength. I could visualise just about every scene - very well done. A criticism? You've used the word 'orb' a lot. Words like that stand apart. I think you're giving Barry Northern a run for his money in the fable world! Monsters who aren't monsters and men who are. An enjoyable read -thanks :) Hoorah! Well done David. Your ability to really 'place' the story was its strength. I could visualise just about every scene – very well done. A criticism? You've used the word 'orb' a lot. Words like that stand apart. I think you're giving Barry Northern a run for his money in the fable world! Monsters who aren't monsters and men who are. An enjoyable read -thanks :)

]]> By: Lily Mulholland http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-453 Lily Mulholland Mon, 15 Feb 2010 10:17:58 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-453 Hoorah! Well done David. Your ability to really 'place' the story was its strength. I could visualise just about every scene - very well done. A criticism? You've used the word 'orb' a lot. Words like that stand apart. I think you're giving Barry Northern a run for his money in the fable world! Monsters who aren't monsters and men who are. An enjoyable read -thanks :) Hoorah! Well done David. Your ability to really 'place' the story was its strength. I could visualise just about every scene – very well done. A criticism? You've used the word 'orb' a lot. Words like that stand apart. I think you're giving Barry Northern a run for his money in the fable world! Monsters who aren't monsters and men who are. An enjoyable read -thanks :)

]]> By: Lily Mulholland http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-454 Lily Mulholland Mon, 15 Feb 2010 10:17:58 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-454 Hoorah! Well done David. Your ability to really 'place' the story was its strength. I could visualise just about every scene - very well done. A criticism? You've used the word 'orb' a lot. Words like that stand apart. I think you're giving Barry Northern a run for his money in the fable world! Monsters who aren't monsters and men who are. An enjoyable read -thanks :) Hoorah! Well done David. Your ability to really 'place' the story was its strength. I could visualise just about every scene – very well done. A criticism? You've used the word 'orb' a lot. Words like that stand apart. I think you're giving Barry Northern a run for his money in the fable world! Monsters who aren't monsters and men who are. An enjoyable read -thanks :)

]]> By: Lily Mulholland http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-455 Lily Mulholland Mon, 15 Feb 2010 10:17:58 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-455 Hoorah! Well done David. Your ability to really 'place' the story was its strength. I could visualise just about every scene - very well done. A criticism? You've used the word 'orb' a lot. Words like that stand apart. I think you're giving Barry Northern a run for his money in the fable world! Monsters who aren't monsters and men who are. An enjoyable read -thanks :) Hoorah! Well done David. Your ability to really 'place' the story was its strength. I could visualise just about every scene – very well done. A criticism? You've used the word 'orb' a lot. Words like that stand apart. I think you're giving Barry Northern a run for his money in the fable world! Monsters who aren't monsters and men who are. An enjoyable read -thanks :)

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-339 David G Shrock Fri, 22 Jan 2010 13:50:27 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-339 Yes, there will be a PDF and ePub of entire story. We'll see you at the end. Yes, there will be a PDF and ePub of entire story. We'll see you at the end.

]]> By: chance1234 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-337 chance1234 Fri, 22 Jan 2010 11:26:37 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-337 When you get to the end of the series, are you planning to make them downloadable as a whole ? ie a pdf <br><br>I find them good, but I think like peggy would like to wai t to the end to read them all through. When you get to the end of the series, are you planning to make them downloadable as a whole ? ie a pdf

I find them good, but I think like peggy would like to wai t to the end to read them all through.

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-271 David G Shrock Sat, 02 Jan 2010 06:28:17 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-271 Thanks, peggy. <br><br>Understandable if you decide to wait. I sometimes do. I've been reading @techtigger's series two at a time. Thanks, peggy.

Understandable if you decide to wait. I sometimes do. I've been reading @techtigger's series two at a time.

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-270 David G Shrock Sat, 02 Jan 2010 06:21:00 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-270 Thanks, and welcome to Sebastian's adventures. Thanks, and welcome to Sebastian's adventures.

]]> By: peggy http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-268 peggy Sat, 02 Jan 2010 04:02:19 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-268 This is well written and very interesting. I can't decide whether to wait and read it all at once or take it week by week. <br><br>I like how the reader can empathize with all the characters, and the pacing works. This is well written and very interesting. I can't decide whether to wait and read it all at once or take it week by week.

I like how the reader can empathize with all the characters, and the pacing works.

]]> By: annetylerlord http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/12/dunston-monster-contents/comment-page-1/#comment-262 annetylerlord Fri, 01 Jan 2010 19:12:48 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=470#comment-262 David,<br><br>This proves to be a very interesting series. Very intriguing giant in a wild-west type setting - and can't wait to see what happens with the monsters. David,

This proves to be a very interesting series. Very intriguing giant in a wild-west type setting – and can't wait to see what happens with the monsters.

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