Dunston Monster Contents

Dunston Monster is an 8-part weekly series of #fridayflash stories (posted on Friday) starting January 1st, 2010. This series covers the history of a minor character from my Draco Torre novels. Follow the young Sebastian

Rhemus, the son of a giant taking up the family profession on a journey among monsters under the watchful eyes of Father Young.

Each part is a flash story moving the main story. Within the story, links reference previous Sebastian Rhemus stories, optional background reading. Your comments are welcome on each individual part or on the whole.

Previous Sebastian Rhemus stories

Dunston Monster

  1. Shotgun Welcome
  2. Tabitha
  3. Riddle on the Ridge
  4. Crossroads
  5. Sinners
  6. Monster Savior
  7. Killer [violence]*
  8. Demon Hunter [blood]*

Contents links updated each Friday as new part posted.

*Warnings for the very sensitive.

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Thanks for reading “Dunston Monster.” Comments or questions? Please, let me know what you think. I appreciate your opinion.

“Duston Montster” appears in Shadow Memories available on Smashwords and Amazon.

If you enjoyed this story, you may also enjoy my novel, Raven Memory, a modern science-fantasy in the same world.

Sebastian is part of Draco Torre’s world. See more of him in future short stories and in my second novel.

-David G Shrock

“Dunston Monster” including artwork copyright © 2010 David G Shrock

Flash Stories

A flash story consists of 1,000 words or less (some insist on 500,) enjoyed in about five minutes. Writing a short story is a different beast from writing a novel, and a very short story is another creature still. Brevity is key. Words are valuable, used sparingly, given strong respect.

I’m not as familiar with short fiction; I primarily read novels. A year ago, I struggled to write a complete short story, one with a beginning, middle, and end. I could write a slice of life or an excerpt, but a complete story in under a 1,000 words became my challenge. A good goal, concise writing improves all forms including the epic.

I practiced by writing Twitter fiction working with the words. I read short stories, studying them, comparing different styles. I wrote a few short stories without a care for the word count.

Then I started reading #fridayflash. Reading the stories and comments, I realized what I needed: goals, sharing, and feedback. I started by commenting on other stories, and when I felt I was ready I wrote my first in October titled, “Young Secret.” The reading, sharing, and writing each week improved my skill very quickly. I have also gained an appreciation of short fiction. I thank the #fridayflash participants for sharing their stories, sharing knowledge, and for their support. Thanks!

My latest flash story, “Mother Dove” is the result of my effort. I now take my new knowledge and apply it to my novels. I will continue to post flash fiction on Fridays, not every week, but often enough as long as I enjoy it. You may find my flash stories posted with the Flash Fiction tag.

What are your thoughts on flash fiction?

#fridayflash

Jon of Mad Utopia hosts #fridayflash. There you will find a weekly summary posted each Saturday containing links to flash stories. With over 50 stories each week, the #fridayflash group offers a large selection spanning every genre. On your lunch break, pick a few stories and comment on the ones you like.

This week Mad Utopia offers a contest just for readers. Read the complete details. After reading, nominate your favorite story for “Readers Choice.” Good luck.

2010 Preview

Flash Stories

Frequency of #fridayflash posts will depend on time and feedback. Flash fiction is not my strongest area. If readers enjoy them, I’ll post more. Otherwise expect fewer flash stories while I concentrate on other topics. To start the year, the young Sebastian Rhemus will continue his adventure in a short serial. Tags: Flash Fiction, Sebastian Rhemus, Story Category: Stories

My first novel

I’ve been sitting on a completed novel, Raven Memory, for some time now deciding what to do with it. I want to release it on my time and terms. Future posts will include art, video, and sample chapters. Sometime in the next year I will release Raven Memory to the world. Tags: Raven Memory, Draco Torre Category: Novels

What Time? Series

Appearing on 2nd and 4th Tuesday of each month, this series takes a look at the science of time and relation to my novels. We will explore perceptions of time, memory, time travel, paradoxes, and other mysteries. Each post will keep the science basic providing references to more extensive information. Tags: What-Time, science Category: Science

The Usual

Other posts about reading and writing will continue. With all kinds of new reading devices, there should be plenty to discuss for the next few years. New technology allows new forms of storytelling. I’m very interesting in seeing what develops.

Feel free to join the discussion at any time including older posts.

Mother Dove

a flash story by David G Shrock

“What’s the matter with you?”

Fred winced at the familiar query. Crouched, he held the paintbrush tight. He knew what came next. It never failed. Dipping the brush into the can, he sloshed white paint onto the fence.

Leaning on her walker, Mother Dove stood on the porch glaring across the yard. “Have a hole in your head?”

Paint slapped on wood turning mottled gray white. Bristles splattered paint on Fred’s face. Frowning, he continued on pretending the old woman was dead.

“After Labor Day,” said Mother Dove. “The yard can’t wear white.”

“Yes, Mother Dove,” said Fred. The old woman was never quite right, but it seemed the accident had stolen more than her hip. “But the fence is a blight.”

“Fred, my boy, paint the fence red.” she said. “It will go with the leaves. Might as well, you’ll not rake them anyhow.” Mother Dove turned, moved her walker clunking across the boards. She leaned on the handles, and her feet waddled a rump-rump sound. Clunk-rump-rump she went back inside.

Snatching the pail, Fred stood wondering how he put up with her. “Love,” he said, “it’s all that matters now.”

After finishing the fence, painted burgundy, Fred looked over the yard. The lawn needed mowing, the flowers demanded water, and rot threatened the eaves. He mowed the grass, even raked up stray blades from the flower garden. The yard appeared neat even without white.

Ladder leaned against the house, Fred climbed, a trowel in hand. Digging into moss and murk, he cleared the eaves, scratching away years of neglect. He heard the door open, and he paused.

Then it came, a clunk-rump-rump. “Fred?” said Mother Dove, moving her walker, a clunk-rump-rump. At the edge of the porch, she looked up. “What’s the matter with you? Have a hole in your head?”

Oh, Fred thought, how I wish her dead. He peered down. “The eaves,” he said.

“No leaves in them eaves!” Mother Dove stomped her walker on the boards. “It’s nap time as you’re well aware! Boy, let the eaves be. I have a new birdbath, didn’t you see?” A clunk-rump-rump, Mother Dove dragged her bad hip back into the house.

Fred climbed down the ladder and headed into the garage. He stood staring at the birdbath. The stone structure stood half his own height. “The birdbath will look great beside the oak tree.”

Grabbing the wide basin, he swung the pedestal out landing with a thud. His shoulders ached, but his love for Mother Dove carried him on. As quiet as he could, he walked the birdbath thudding between his soft steps across the lawn.

Positioned between the oak tree and rose bushes, the birdbath was a sight. All it needed was a splash of water. Turning around, he spotted the old woman on the porch leaning over her walker.

“Fred, have a hole in your head? That’s the north end!” Mother Dove shook her head. “Everybody knows birds bathe south for winter. You’re as dull as the dead!” A clunk-rump-rump she went into the house again.

Hands clenched, Fred stormed across the lawn, stomped onto the porch, and through the open doorway. He loved Mother Dove, but the wreck had stolen more than her hip. Reaching behind the door, he grabbed the baseball bat and swung. The sound meeting his ears was not the expected crack, more like a thunk of a melon. No more rumping and clunking, she slept in her own blood for more than an hour.

The sun down, town asleep, Fred turned off the porch light and crept, shovel in hand, into the garden. He scooped the petunias and begonias aside. He dug a hole. Twice he paused to listen, but not a sound met his ears. Finished digging, he returned to the house. Hefting the portly woman over-shoulder, he took the walker in hand, and stomped outside. He dumped the old bag, walker and all, into her grave.

“See what I did? No hole in my head.”

Petunias and begonias back in place, there was only one more thing to set everything right. Fred carried the birdbath, thumping across the lawn between his steps, and plopped the stone monument among the flowers.

“South side it is. Just like Mother Dove said.”

Returning to the house, Fred threw the door shut and took to the sofa. Arms sore, legs weary, he leaned back for a well deserved doze. Hands folded over belly, he closed his eyes.

A clunk sound broke his repose.

Sitting up, Fred gazed at the closed front door. It came again, a clunk on the porch. What could it be at this late hour? He already knew, and a rump-rump confirmed it. Another clunk-rump-rump, and the door flew open. Mother Dove, covered in dirt, leaned over her walker.

“Fred my boy,” said Mother Dove. “You never been right since the smash-up.” Clunk-rump-rump, she walked into the house spilling a cloud of dust. “A hole in your head, isn’t that what I said?”

Fred scrambled to the mirror, and there he saw it within his mess of hair, a circle of red. “I have a hole in my head,” he said. “All along since the car accident, we’ve been dead.”

Why I Write

Dawn, the border between worlds. Photo by David G Shrock.

Dawn, the border between worlds. Photo by David G Shrock.

Dreams during my childhood filled my head with visions of wonder, adventures across the cosmos visiting other worlds, traveling back in time. Ghosts were my companions fighting zombies, trekking across ruined landscapes, and docking my spacecraft to orbital stations. Whenever a difficult question emerged, I worked it out with the ghosts by imagining the strange wonders of the cosmos. I made many friends, memories. I met many ghosts.

I still do.

Ghosts, haunting memories, take me where I never imagined as a child. They show me new ways of viewing life and the cosmos. Even while riding my bike across the bridge, looking at the city in Dawn’s splendor, the ghosts are with me pulling me into their land.

Ghosts whisper secrets. I call them ghosts, but they are not dead. They live, their memories burning into the fabric of the cosmos. Torre is one of them.

Writing is not my trade. A writer is not who I am. Telling stories is not a position or a service. It’s what we do. We share our ghosts. I’m a computer scientist with stories consuming my head.

I write for practice. I write for an audience of one, except maybe for Mom as well. Not for recognition, not for money, I never dream of my name on spines of books. Writing is hard. I enjoy visiting new places. Not writing. I write so I don’t forget. Practice improves my writing so I may tell their story with the honor they deserve. I write for them.

I write for her.

After years of exploring, sharing lives together, information builds into a river threatening banks. They want their story told. She needs her story told before the river floods the land washing away dreams leaving ghosts without a home. They need a place to call their own.

I tell their story so in the end, they have a place to stay, their own piece of cosmic fabric to remember them.

Remember her. I write for one.

I write for Torre.

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Why do you write?

Darkness Was Her Dress

a flash story by David G Shrock

Looking at the girl, Nyx found a face wrecked in worry. She noted the clasped hands, thumbs working flesh.

Nobody ever asked anything of Nyx besides her swift departure. Men huddled by the fire or hid in their homes. They never faced her. Nobody ever did, not until that early morning the young girl came calling.

Removing her hat, Nyx peered up at the glimmering stars. Considering the request, she ran fingers back through her dark hair. The moon smiled, but face half illuminated it appeared more like a sneer. Looking east, she saw the red embers reminding her of a kiss.

The request came again in a burst of tears.

Patting hat on head, Nyx offered a smile. It felt cold, and she saw fear in the wide eyes.

Agreeing to the request, Nyx tugged at her dress gathering the darkness about her. She stormed across the meadow her cold gaze bearing down on Black Woods. Nocturnal insects sang their songs. Hair blowing, dress flowing, she crossed a river. A man dove into a home, door slamming shut. Entering the woods, she stormed up the mountain, river of darkness flowing behind her.

Atop the granite peak, the moon lit the way. Creeping from the woods, the wolves circled around. Some snarled, others cooed. Reaching out, she stroked their black manes as each one passed. Alpha took position upon his rock, and the others settled down gnawing at bones.

Alpha grinned, teeth dripping satisfaction. “Mistress,” he said, “we have done you a great favor.”

Spotting a boy climbing upon the rock, Nyx recognized the eyes. The girl’s brother stroked Alpha’s back. In the west, red embers lingered on horizon. Glancing east, she watched light growing bold. The weight of the problem fell upon her.

“The lad only wants to see his dear sister,” said Alpha.

Nyx shook her head. “Don’t believe his lies.” The wolves of the night wanted her all to themselves, never again hiding in their cave from her lost lover. “He means to devour you both.”

The boy withdrew his hand, fear melting his face. He stepped down from the rock.

“Dusk is ours!” Alpha snapped his teeth and snarled.

Reaching into dark dress, Nyx withdrew a sword. Fury exploded from her dress, cold waving over the mountain. She held the sword high, blade sparking into night sky. Tails hanging, the wolves glanced about. Nyx lashed out releasing energy. The mountain darkened, and wolves yipped bounding into their cave. Another thunder sent Alpha leaping from his rock.

The blade simmered smoking tendrils.

Standing before the boy, Nyx offered a smile. Her frozen glare sent him stumbling back.

“Please,” said the boy. “My sister.”

Looking upon the sorrow, her own longing grew. Lover lost, a forgotten kiss tickled her face. The siblings deserved better.

Gazing at the lantern in the sky, she pleaded. Listening, the moon nodded thinking it over. The wolves grew bolder, yellow eyes glinting from their cave. At last, the moon smiled and offered a solution.

Turning to the boy, Nyx knelt. “You will see your sister again, but you must return. Guard the border.”

Wiping a tear, the boy nodded. He took the sword and descended the mountain into the west.

Already the dark wolves were bounding down the mountain towards orange blazing horizon.

Descending through woods, cascading darkness, Nyx chased after. Reaching into the dark, she unsheathed her last remaining sword. The blade glimmered lighting the way. Bursting into the meadow, she found the girl surrounded by wolves.

Growls rumbled. Jaws snapped. The girl retreated, but the pack closed in caging their prey.

The blade sparked, a blinding orange shattered air sending wolves tumbling. Leaping onto his feet, Alpha snarled at the light. Waving the sword, Nyx glared at the wolf.

Light burned higher into sky; the dark wolves were out of time. A growl at eastern horizon, Alpha turned and led his pack racing for the cave.

Holding out the sword, Nyx instructed the girl on its use. Light recharged the blade keeping dark wolves at bay. Taking the weapon, the girl queried about her brother.

Removing hat, Nyx wiped cold sweat from her brow. “A promise. You will reunite with your brother. Whenever the moon joins the sun, light and dark together, you two shall meet.”

Throwing arms around, the girl hugged her.

The dawn fire burned. Nyx remembered the day, not its warm touch, but the brightness. Facing south, she gazed up at sky. Half her face lit, the moon smiled brightening the dark side.

Morning birds sang greetings. Men stirred in their homes. The wolves hid in their cave. Nocturnal creatures took a deep breath chilling the air, and settled into slumber.

Squishing hat on her head, Nyx looked down at the pleasant eyes.

“Will you watch with me?” Another request. A little hand rose, fingers open. “Will you watch the sunrise?”

Gathering the darkness about her, she reached out and grasped the warm hand. Sky blazed, orange pushing back the darkness. Dawn glowed.

Winking, the moon signaled the sun: the passage was clear.

Nyx remembered sunrise, the grandeur. Warm kiss, a forgotten memory teased her cheek. Lips quivering, she yearned to return the sweetness.

Day fire burned extinguishing stars. The world faded, little hand slipping away, a fleeing memory. Storm of light and dark rumbled, a wind pulled at dress and tugged hair. Nyx clasped her hat, and the world returned in a breath.

Glancing west, Nyx spotted the burning horizon where Dusk stood holding his sword. She looked at her empty hand, recalling the warmth, remembering Dawn.

She waved at Dusk and spun around heading into a valley. Darkness was her dress flowing over the land. Never sleeping, she raged on. The night was hers, and she was the night. The night moved on.