Comments on: Warton Haunt http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/ Wed, 14 Sep 2011 14:45:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Eric J. Krause http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-152 Eric J. Krause Wed, 18 Nov 2009 18:59:19 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-152 This was a well-written story filled with great descriptions. Very nice! This was a well-written story filled with great descriptions. Very nice!

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-151 David G Shrock Wed, 18 Nov 2009 14:36:20 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-151 Thanks. I don't know about magic in the words, but I'm familiar with that strange sensation you mention. I try to make sure each Sebastian flash story stands on its own, each one offering a little more background to the character. Thanks. I don't know about magic in the words, but I'm familiar with that strange sensation you mention. I try to make sure each Sebastian flash story stands on its own, each one offering a little more background to the character.

]]> By: Laurita http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-150 Laurita Wed, 18 Nov 2009 13:56:34 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-150 Great imagery. This was a nice, heartwarming tale. I too liked the line about heaven having room for the superstitious. Great imagery. This was a nice, heartwarming tale. I too liked the line about heaven having room for the superstitious.

]]> By: cascadelily http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-149 cascadelily Wed, 18 Nov 2009 11:37:25 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-149 I had the strangest sensation while reading this. I didn't understand a lot as I was puzzling over the characters and their backstories, but when I reached the end it all seemed to make sense. Some kind of magic in them words! I also realised at the end that this is one of a number of stories about the protag. Cool read. Thanks! I had the strangest sensation while reading this. I didn't understand a lot as I was puzzling over the characters and their backstories, but when I reached the end it all seemed to make sense. Some kind of magic in them words! I also realised at the end that this is one of a number of stories about the protag. Cool read. Thanks!

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-148 J. M. Strother Tue, 17 Nov 2009 01:02:46 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-148 Nice follow up to last week's story. Seems Sebastian caught a bit of luck here, almost an accidental hero. But somehow I get the feeling this is not the last word on the haunt. Looking forward to more.<br>~jon Nice follow up to last week's story. Seems Sebastian caught a bit of luck here, almost an accidental hero. But somehow I get the feeling this is not the last word on the haunt. Looking forward to more.
~jon

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-147 David G Shrock Sun, 15 Nov 2009 23:30:26 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-147 Thanks Olivia and Donald. More Sebastian will come next month, and eventually appear in my Novel as an experienced older man. Thanks Olivia and Donald. More Sebastian will come next month, and eventually appear in my Novel as an experienced older man.

]]> By: SimplyOlivia http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-146 SimplyOlivia Sun, 15 Nov 2009 16:02:46 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-146 Sebastian is an interesting character, very real, very sweet, a gentle giant. That's a lovely image. I'd love to read more about him. Your descriptive writing is very vivid. Sebastian is an interesting character, very real, very sweet, a gentle giant. That's a lovely image. I'd love to read more about him. Your descriptive writing is very vivid.

]]> By: Donald Conrad http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-145 Donald Conrad Sun, 15 Nov 2009 13:13:02 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-145 I could read more of this big guy's adventures. You given us his thought process, and I like the way he thinks. I could read more of this big guy's adventures. You given us his thought process, and I like the way he thinks.

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-143 David G Shrock Sat, 14 Nov 2009 02:37:51 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-143 Thanks, Mark. Your thought on the noise fits this story well. But I guess we'll never really know. Thanks, Mark. Your thought on the noise fits this story well. But I guess we'll never really know.

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/11/warton-haunt/comment-page-1/#comment-144 David G Shrock Sat, 14 Nov 2009 02:29:59 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=366#comment-144 Thanks for the kind comments. <br><br>I'm not excited about this one. It's a safe forgettable tale, but a fun exercise. It might work better taken in as part of a larger story.<br><br>I aim to do better next week. Now, I'm back to reading. Thanks for the kind comments.

I'm not excited about this one. It's a safe forgettable tale, but a fun exercise. It might work better taken in as part of a larger story.

I aim to do better next week. Now, I'm back to reading.

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