Comments on: Ghost Curtain http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/10/ghost-curtain/ Wed, 14 Sep 2011 14:45:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: markkerstetter http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/10/ghost-curtain/comment-page-1/#comment-118 markkerstetter Mon, 02 Nov 2009 17:24:17 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=347#comment-118 I didn't think of Thomas, but there's poetry in your prose, like a vine straining against the confines of the word-count. I didn't think of Thomas, but there's poetry in your prose, like a vine straining against the confines of the word-count.

]]> By: Laurita http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/10/ghost-curtain/comment-page-1/#comment-116 Laurita Sun, 01 Nov 2009 19:11:42 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=347#comment-116 Fantastic imagery and great flow. Loved your style with this. Favourite phrase - "Darkness was her dress flowing over the land." Fantastic imagery and great flow. Loved your style with this. Favourite phrase – “Darkness was her dress flowing over the land.”

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/10/ghost-curtain/comment-page-1/#comment-112 David G Shrock Sat, 31 Oct 2009 17:37:52 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=347#comment-112 I can't recall if I've read Dylan Thomas. I will refresh my memory by taking a look. Thanks, Olivia. I can't recall if I've read Dylan Thomas. I will refresh my memory by taking a look. Thanks, Olivia.

]]> By: David G Shrock http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/10/ghost-curtain/comment-page-1/#comment-113 David G Shrock Sat, 31 Oct 2009 17:34:16 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=347#comment-113 Thanks for the comments. <br><br>I like stories that jump right in. The word limit of flash for a story of this length required sprinkling out the character information so by the end everything should fall into place.<br><br>I was originally going to leave Nyx unnamed, but I get confused with too many unnamed characters. Her name is from Greek for goddess of night, but I like the sound of Nyx for this character. So, it worked out. Thanks for the comments.

I like stories that jump right in. The word limit of flash for a story of this length required sprinkling out the character information so by the end everything should fall into place.

I was originally going to leave Nyx unnamed, but I get confused with too many unnamed characters. Her name is from Greek for goddess of night, but I like the sound of Nyx for this character. So, it worked out.

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/10/ghost-curtain/comment-page-1/#comment-111 J. M. Strother Sat, 31 Oct 2009 15:20:27 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=347#comment-111 It took me a while to figure out what was going on, but it all fell into place by the end. An interesting mythos you've developed here, and well done.<br>~jon It took me a while to figure out what was going on, but it all fell into place by the end. An interesting mythos you've developed here, and well done.
~jon

]]> By: SimplyOlivia http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/10/ghost-curtain/comment-page-1/#comment-110 SimplyOlivia Sat, 31 Oct 2009 13:56:53 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=347#comment-110 Ah, shades of Dylan Thomas. Very nice. This is an interesting concept and your writing style works well with it. Thanks for sharing it. Ah, shades of Dylan Thomas. Very nice. This is an interesting concept and your writing style works well with it. Thanks for sharing it.

]]> By: Cecilia Dominic http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/2009/10/ghost-curtain/comment-page-1/#comment-108 Cecilia Dominic Sat, 31 Oct 2009 03:22:48 +0000 http://www.dracotorre.com/blog/?p=347#comment-108 Ah, the quarrels of the gods. Those must be some confused humans to see night, dusk, and dawn all in the same place! Beautifully described! Ah, the quarrels of the gods. Those must be some confused humans to see night, dusk, and dawn all in the same place! Beautifully described!

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